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=**__Information__**=

__My Name__ = Lekan King

__Presentation Date__ = January 14

__My Mentor__ = Mrs. Penzone

__Subject & sub-topics__ = soccer utilize instant replay recognize appropriate negotiate correct call competition officials rules uncertainties

__Thesis Question__ = How can instant replay negotiate the correct calls in a sports match?

__Thesis Sentence__ = Instant replay negotiates the correct calls in a sports match.

__Statements__ = Soccer does not utilize instant replay. Soccer officials do not recognize every appropriate call during a competition. Instant replay negotiates appropriate rules uncertainties. Soccer should utilize instant replay.

__Premise(s)__ = Soccer officials do not recognize every appropriate call during a competition. Instant replay negotiates appropriate rules uncertainties. Instant replay can interrupted the flow of the quick flowing game of soccer
 * When the declination of a referee is over turned, he is disgraced**

__Conclusion__ = Instant replay can destroy an officials best judgment of a call in the game of soccer

__Thesis sentence (argument included)__ = Since soccer officials do not recognize every appropriate call during a competition and instant replay negotiates appropriate rules uncertainties, it can be concluded that soccer should utilize instant replay to make as many appropriate calls as possible.

__Thesis Question (enhanced)__ = Since soccer officials do not recognize every appropriate call during a competition and instant replay negotiates appropriate rules uncertainties, how can soccer utilize instant replay to make as many appropriate calls as possible?